I like the colors in this-- but I agree with ~inno-a-satana, there needs to be more subject, less negative space. Another way you could deal with that, other than just moving the subject farther into the frame would also to get her more into focus. Because right now, she's only a little bit of the picture and out of focus-- so there's very little to look at. Keep pluggin.
Esther
I love this. The composition is so original. It perhaps needs more curvuture in the pose, to go with the hair style (reminds me of Aeon Flux). I disagree with the above two comments about there being more subject and less negative space. Its what makes it unique and abstract like. Dont you dare touch it !
i happen to love the negitive space used here. i think its a great photo with even better use of colours. it reminds me of the "gap" adverts. im also liking the hair movement too. good job.
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Esther
Nice use of negative space.
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Showna was here.
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Great great clothing
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